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| Topic Started: Oct 22 2009, 08:53 PM (1,105 Views) | |
| RamGang | Oct 22 2009, 08:53 PM Post #1 |
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here is some of the drawings that i have done.
Edited by RamGang, Oct 27 2009, 02:22 PM.
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| Kari | Oct 23 2009, 01:08 PM Post #2 |
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Pretty good! I think next time you do a dragton, try to keep the edges smoother, and make the body less thick, maybe. It's a bit out of proportions. I think you need longer legs, definetely a thicker tail, and maybe thinner body, too. |
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| wyvern95 | Oct 23 2009, 01:58 PM Post #3 |
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It is pretty good, but Kari's right. One thing that might help you is try defining the muscles. I would also suggest thinking about the wing membrane not as if it's stretched all the time, but that it can fold, like the pleats in cloth when you hold two of the corners in your hands. Shading might also help a little too. |
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| Sangyne | Oct 23 2009, 02:51 PM Post #4 |
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Okay my turn XD lol. I'm chalk full of tips! The neck of a dragon should be a little thicker and they are not normally that long- depending on the breed, Chinese/japenese tend to have a more longer neck then the European style- The chest, shoulders, and stomach could have more body to it {i suggest trying to draw with shapes, A circle for the chest, a smaller circle for the hind quarters and a smaller one for legs and the joints in the legs} The tail should be thicker near the base, The wings look weak, Dragons take pride in their wings {and color of scales} the wings should look more stronger, as wyvern said, try to create the illusion of Muscle. The jaw could have a little more body to it. With the hind legs, the way they are positioned you wouldn't see the hind claw. Same goes for the front leg in the back, you wouldn't see the back claw. The wings, I also noticed you put the horn on it, sometimes its easier to use the actual clawed finger ^^" Never EVER sketch dark. Start out VERY lightly, using light pencil strokes, that way if you makw a mistake and have to erase, the line of mistake wont be there. This is effective if you use the shapes to draw with ^^'. Once you are satisfied with the drawing, then you can go over it with a pencil or you can ink it with a simple ball point pen-every day buy at wall mart type. To add to wyv's muscle tip, a way to create the illsuion of a muscle on an arm, say you want to do the wing base? Look at the arm of a human, You can see the distinction of a human muscle in the Dragon wing, and the arm of a human and dragon are likewise the same, looking at the muscle diagram of a dog would work too seeing as the dragon has some of the same basis of a dog in the legs. For the neck, sometimes a simple curved line around the middle of the neck can work and give that illusion. I noticed you tried to create a 'plantigrade' type foot. {plantigrade means it walks on the pad of its feet{like a cat} Digigrade means it walks on it toes{like a raptor} to create the plantigrade look you might want to make the actual toe more blockish and the foot as well. ^^' well there's my...harsh sounding critisim. I don't mean to be harsh just trying to help ^^" |
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| RamGang | Oct 27 2009, 02:04 PM Post #5 |
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added some more art |
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| Kari | Oct 27 2009, 02:25 PM Post #6 |
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... I have no idea what 004 is supposed to be, but it's kind of cool. Looks like a cloth fluttering in the breeze. |
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| RamGang | Oct 27 2009, 02:28 PM Post #7 |
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the 003 and 004 are dragon eyes custom by me. |
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| Kari | Oct 27 2009, 02:30 PM Post #8 |
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Ah, I see it now. XD |
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| Sangyne | Oct 27 2009, 07:44 PM Post #9 |
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Not bad! I like the desighns for 003 and 004 ^^" |
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| RamGang | Oct 27 2009, 08:15 PM Post #10 |
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i can take requests on design 003 and 004 just ask and it will be done. and also if one of the excellent drawers don't mind i am working on another dragon i might ask for advice as i am going to post a pic as i do each part just to show my progression from each part. Edited by RamGang, Oct 27 2009, 09:10 PM.
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| Sangyne | Oct 28 2009, 02:34 PM Post #11 |
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I'll gladly help you out ram ^^' Thats what I and others are here for! We are trying get the arts section more alive ^^' Kari's idea. I'd love helping you and others out. |
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| RamGang | Oct 28 2009, 04:23 PM Post #12 |
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ok the first pic shows all the shapes used the lines in green you will not see in the other 2 pics. the second one is finished just with noting major on the wings little mussle but cut me a break im a beginner. the 3rd one is a WIP but ill show you it so i can get some ideas.
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| Sangyne | Oct 28 2009, 04:26 PM Post #13 |
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Not bad ^^' Rreally I've given all the suggestions I can in my first post so lol ^^' Practice and patience! |
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| RamGang | Oct 30 2009, 03:05 PM Post #14 |
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another attempt at a dragon.
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| Sangyne | Oct 30 2009, 03:24 PM Post #15 |
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Something yuou might want to try, look around Deviant Art, Look at some of the various tradiational artists on there, and once you find a style of art you like, try to develop your own off it. Thats how I created my style, but I learned from a really good friend of mine ^^; |
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| RamGang | Oct 30 2009, 04:24 PM Post #16 |
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origial picture credit goes to Sangyne i just redrew it Thanks for leting me Sangyne
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| Sangyne | Oct 30 2009, 04:28 PM Post #17 |
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Neat! XD I like it! And your welcome, I dont have a problem with people using my art as long as I know them and they ask me first. I wish I had a more better picture of it {hence my need of a scanner! } XD |
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| dragongirl88 | Oct 30 2009, 09:39 PM Post #18 |
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I like your drawings a lot! But I don't really know what those cloth-like drawings were... They looked like stained glass windows as well. XD |
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| RamGang | Oct 30 2009, 09:42 PM Post #19 |
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original drawing copyrighted to Sangyne just a recolor of one of Sangyne's drawings
Edited by RamGang, Oct 30 2009, 09:43 PM.
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| Sangyne | Nov 1 2009, 11:15 AM Post #20 |
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I Like it, nice job ^^ You tried changing the settings of your scanner to see if it can pick up black lines in pencil better? It might be a setting. {shrugs} |
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